开头：背景信息，主题观点

主体：Firstly，in a nutshell

for my part;harbor the view;on my person level

这个体验还很不错噢。

哈哈

劳资今天主动学习ing 

有进步！

老套议论文(lack of originality and creativity)

* background ( thesis statement )

   Well-seasoned and logical

   Properly concluded

   Very few grammatical and spelling mistakes

优秀议论文（breakthrough）distinct 

*thesis statement 简洁但是明确

  evidence事实，数据，经历，权威观点

  logic fallacies  （hasty generalization以偏概全，false cause虚假原因，black or white非黑即白，bandwagon fallacy从众谬误，appeal to authority诉诸权威）

    grammer

    transition（新颖）

1. 不要过分依赖模版

2. 内容---主题句，论证（举例），说理

    语言----语法，词汇，衔接

  evidently, hence, in conclusion, likewise, similarly, in the same manner, whereas, nevertheless, instead, conversely, neverthless, by the same token, apart from, on top of that (besides)

3  好作文

  词汇，排比，四个证明例子+一个反例，连接词地道，思路清晰，逻辑性强

好议论文：观点明晰  行为流畅  结构严谨  逻辑缜密   独特鲜活

clear and strong thesis

natural transition

compact structure

logical reasoning

correct grammar and spelling

distinct personality                          

主题句一定要明晰

举例：摆事实、列数据、权威的客观观点

Argumentation: 议论文

 Outline

step1 Modal explanation

 A brief overview of al student's performance:

-- 毕业/ 创业人数

Sample ：

Nowadays with the development of the society and changes of the government's policies, there is a common phenomenon that more and more college graduates begin to build their own companies after graduating from the college.

Claim1/2/3

Conclusion

模版：易用/缺乏创新

Finding a breakthrough

-- content & ideas

thesis statement 主题句(简洁，明晰)

Sample： revival  traditional Chinese characters

议论文的模板 束缚自己的思想

摆脱模板，发出自己的声音

千篇一律 没有原创性和创造性

突破模板：长期积累  夯实基本功

content / ideas 内容和观点做到以下三个方面:

1主题句 全文围绕的中心 不能忽视的环节

2 举例  亲身经历；权威观点

3 论述的逻辑性  避免逻辑谬误---以偏概全；虚假原因；非黑即白；从众谬误；诉诸权威

语言表达和句子衔接方面： 语法（校对，动词过去式）；词汇；连接词（耳目一新）

好的议论文：观点明晰；行文流畅；结构严谨；逻辑缜密；独特鲜活的个性

thesis statement提出自己的观点：Introduing the claims the writer is going to expand later.

linking word

Evidence1: For each claim you make, you need to provide supporting evidence.

in a nutshell:conclusion

Finding a breakthrough

Content/Ideas:thesis statements；evidence;reasoning

Language&Development:grammar;vocabulary;transition

Logic Fallacies:

1.Hasty generalization

2.False cause

3.Black or white

4.Bandwagon fallacy

5.Appeal to authority

Getting free from templates

Crafting a good argument

To sum up:

Clear and strong thesis

Natural transition

Compact structure

Logical reasoning

Correct grammar and spelling

Distinct personality

hasty bandwagon 

检查主语一致！ 语法 拼写。更充分利用词汇

traditional words！！ 

content

thesis statement:

• single sentence presents your aruguement
• 完整、明确

evidence

• fact
• statistics
• expert's opinion
• personal experience

reasoning

• attention logic fallacies

1. hasty generalization 以偏概全：prejudice
2. false cause 虚假原因：the society develop rapidly, the deputes of xxx has been more and more violent.
3. balck or white 非黑即白
4. bandwagon fallacy 从众谬误
5. appeal to authority

language

• grammar need to be checked after u have done
• word power is immense
• spelling need to be noticed
• use fresh transitions

sum-up

• distinct personality!

忌模版

Lack of originality and creativity.

A thesis statement is usually a single sentence near the beginning of your paper(most often,at the end of the first paragraph)that presents your argument to the reader.

From my perspective.

On my level,I favor the latter view over the former one, that is, we young adolescents should open access to our Wechat Moments to our parents, just the way we treat our peer friends.

To illustrate this,no one can look further than me.Over the period of my primary school years,I spent every Sunday learning and practicing Chinese calligraphy as well as appreciating Chinese poems.

evidently,hence,in conclusion,likewise,similarly,in the same manner,whereas,nevertheless,instead,conversely,by the same token,apart from,on top of that.

主要为问题：

内容：

主题句：清楚简洁

举例 （避免空洞）：事实，数据，自己的故事，引用名人名言

逻辑性：（避免以偏概全，非黑即白）因果逻辑一致，注意的全面性

即使是背景句，也要具体！！！一定要具体！！

逻辑谬误：

以偏概全：论据不足而匆忙下结论（同统计学，样本数目要多，特殊例子不可代表通常规律）

虚假原因：两件事只是看似有关联但实际无关联

非黑即白：极端片面，忽略事物的多面性 

从众谬误：很多人做并不代表这件事正确（雅思阅读惯用）

述诸权威：老师、家长等认为的并一定是正确的

上机写作注意拼写！！！

设问句，举例（正例&反例），排比句 

连接词的使用：

evidentky, hence, in conclusion, likewise, similarly, in the same manner, whereas, nevertheless, instead, conversely, by the same token, apart from, on top of that (besides), indeed,  accordingly, in other words，means that, to sum up  

in a nutshell 简而言之

on my personal level

open access to 

To illustrate this,  one can look no further than me. + 具体自己的事例