议论文

To sum up :

Clear and strong thesis (观点新颖)

Natural transition （行为流畅）

Compact structure （结构严谨）

Logical reasoning. （逻辑紧密）

Correct grammar and spelling 

Distinct personality. （独特鲜活）

议论文写作

1. 四六级模板不可取

2. 多阅读native speaker 的议论文

3. thesis statement

4. language and development:

4.1. 使用复杂高级词汇

4.2. transition

Sample 1

Currently, the debate over the revival of traditional Chinese characters or has sparked vehement discussion in China. opinions regarding this issue vary from person to person. some pepple are for it, while others think differently. For my part, i harbor the view that traditional Chinese characters, serving as the stepping stone to the development of traditional Chinese culture, should be revived in primary and secondary school textbooks.

Simplified Characerters: A Tool to Promote Traditional Chinese Culture

 Indeed, what the reviaval of traditional charavters does is a waste of resources. as we all know, the textbooks students utilize nowadays are all printed in simplified characters. in other words, in order to revive traditional characters, all the textbooks should be reprinted so as to replace htose dimplified characters with traditional ones, which is totally a waste of papers as well as productivity. in addition, students are compelled to learn reading and writing traditional characers since those words are different from simplified ones in strokes or forms, which is an extra burden for students. accordingly, traditional characters should be discouraged since a huge price is to be paid in order to revive them. likewise, te simplified characters afford th eresponsibility of promoting and preserving traditional Chinese cultre to a large extent.

content/idea

1\shesis statement 主题句

single 

完整明确地表达

2\evidence-factual information from reliable sources 论证

facts 

statistics

expert opinions

examples

experience

3\reasoning 论证逻辑

*logic fallacies 逻辑谬误

hasty generalization 以偏概全

false cause 虚假原因 （两件事之间没有必然的因果关系）

black or white 非黑即白

bandwagon  fallacy 从众谬误

appeal to authority 诉诸权威

language and development 

grammary 

vocabulary 

transition 连接词

evidently

hence

in conclusion 

likewise

similarly

in the same manner

whereas

nevertheless

instead 

conversely

nevertheless 

by the same token

apart from 

on top of that(besides)

1.Background information( Laying the foundation for your argument)

2. Thesis statement( Introducing the claims the writer is going to expand later)

3. Claim1,2,3... (A claim is a statement you make to support your argument)

4. Conclusion

（日常应试，模板作文，很一般，不适合参赛）

Content/Ideas: thesis statement:

      A thesis statement is usually a single sentence near the beginning of your paper(most often, at the end of the first paragraph) that presents your aegument to reader.

Content/Ideas: evidence -- factual information from reliable sources

    facts

    statistics

    expert opinions

    examples

    experience

    etc.

Content/Ideas: reasoning

    logic fallacies

       1. Hasty generalization以偏概全

       2. False cause 虚假原因

       3. Black or white 非黑即白

       4.Bandwagon fallacy 从众谬误

       5. Appeal to authority 诉诸权威

     etc.

Language&Decelopment: grammar

   1. Poor grammer

 Language&Decelopment: vocabulary

   1. Word power

   2. Words we often misspell

   3. Mistakes we often make

Language&Decelopment: transition

Getting free from templates

Crafting a good argument

To sum up:

   1. Clear and strong thesis

   2. Natural transition

   3. Compact structure

   4. Logical reasoning

   5. Correct grammar and spelling

   6. Distinct personality