第一眼看到这个题目“Has man a future?”, 就有一种预感，这篇议论文肯定和我们平时常写的议论文有区别。虽然它的模式还是传统的“表达观点型”的题目，赞成正方观点（世界会越来越好的），或是反方观点（世界的未来岌岌可危）。但是它留给参赛选手的立意比较广，它目的就是要参赛者表达出对世界未来发展所持的态度，具有更加深广的现实意义。在观点落脚点的选择上，我没有任凭自己的感觉妄做决定，而是分别对正反两观点做了预设，权衡之下，我选择了正方的观点。如果在议论文观点落脚点上犹豫不决的话，对正反两观点做预设是不错的方法。但是做预设要求你的判断要快、准，尤其是考场作文，时间比较紧迫，你的预设、选择更得迅速、准确。

通过预设，我确定了写作的中心论：即人类的未来会越来越好的。下一步就是要确立充分、具体的论据。论据是议论文写作最重要的主体部分，论据之间不是孤立存在的，它需要写作者运用一定的技巧将其贯穿起来。我提供了两条论据来支持我的论点。

首先，我对反方的观点加以驳斥，题目中反方认为现代发展带来的一系列问题促使人类进行反思，甚至引起人类的质疑与恐慌，进而开始怀疑人类是否还有未来。对此，我提出了自己的观点，即人类的发展过程中带来的许许多多的质疑、恐慌并非一无是处，它给人类提供了反思的机会，进而更好地发展。

其次，我给出自己的正方论据支持自己的论点，世界未来的美好与否，完全取决于人类自身有没有强烈的渴望去改变、创造未来。而且我列举出一系列人类由“渴望”到“现实”的例子来继续佐证我的论点，只要人类依然存有渴望，未来会很美好。

总的来说，考场作文还有很多不足，比如拼写错误比较多，而且论点之间的衔接上没有处理得很好。

为真实展示选手三小时内的写作风貌，文章为从系统摘出的原生作品，仅供学习分享使用。

Has Man A Future?

People have been for years pondering over the question, "Has man a future?" for years, without reaching any definite conclusions. Those who are in favor of this question, like Liang Shuming, a Chinese philosopher, hold that the world would get better every day. However, with the irresistable and inevitable advancement of the society, the question has aroused different responses. The opponents argue that our future will be in nowhere if some severe menaces like nuclear weapons and climate change remain unchecked. After weighing the question, my choice lies with these advocates. I will give an affirmative answre to this question without hestitation. Man indeed has a future.

It must be admitted that these deep thought, reflection, doubt or even fear about the future of mankind exist for a reason. The modern society is definitely characterized by the rapid rate of change, opportunity and challenge. We have made tremendous improvements in virtually every field of our life. However, some challenges will inevitably ensue. Environment deterioration, wars and population explosion pose a greater menace to our society. Granted that we are in a era that are filled with challenges and changes, we are still be blessed with an inexhaustible wealth of opportunities. We should never let these menaces blind us to the ample opportunities it may offer. And that is the very reason why I still maintain hope for the future of our human.

At the outset, these lurking problems depicted in Morski's picture are not all doom and gloom. On the contrary, they are an indispensable millstones during the course of human's development. Everything has its casualties and prices to pay, the development of our human being is no exception. For instance, we have to pay for our dramatic advancements in technology by withstanding the fear that human being will be manipulated by these intelligent human contrievences such as robots. We have to obtain the enormous industrial improvemnet to better serve ourselves at the expense of our environment and resources. We have to gain a comprehensive understanding of ourselves and the world by giving up something, either volunteerly or compulsively.That is the price of growth. Fortunately, these lurking problems have left us more than the extreme fear and doubt about our future. We are capable to make profound self-reflection and make adjustments and changes accordingly. Rome is not built in one day. It should be covered step by step and brick by brick. And some menaces should be taken into consideration at times. The principle also applies to the forward journey of the development of human being and the world. We need to set us free sometimes and ponder over our past wrongdoings. These lurking problems promise us incomparable opportunities to meditate, to highly raise our awareness of risks and straight out our wrongdoings in the past. Being aware of these acute threats, we are able to spare no effort to remedy them and to make our world a better place. Seen through the perpective mentioned above, these lurking problems resulted from the unprecedented development of the world can really go a long way toward the integrated development and thus the future of human beings.

On top of that, our promising future will be in sight as long as we are eager to make it possible. Nothing is impossible if we struggle to make it come true with our persistance and perseverence. Conspicuously, we have been on the progressive path of self-exploration and world-exploration for many years.We were eager to explore the origin of human being and thus The Origin of Species, the masterpiece of Darwin, was able to be presented to us. We were eager to detect the outside of the earth and thus many space crafts were sent to the outer space to bring us the nysterious outer world. We were eager to talk to our friends thousand miles away and thus the computer technology emerged and went viral. These eagernesses which used to be far from our imagination have been turned into rosy realities. And they are enjoying striking popularity among us. Besides, these eagerness are just epitomies of the whole process of human's exploration of the world and future. Human being is blessed with the impressive imagination and courisity. They can make the world from noting to everying with their eagerness and persistance. Undoubtedly, the promising future of human being can also be anticipated as long as we are eager to, as long as we are on the right track and take self-reflections to correct our wrongdoings.

To put it in a nutshell, the world is, to be sure, far from a rosy picture from what we have imagined. But being unable to change the brutal world, we are none the less be capable of altering our way of observing the world. Future is inpredicted. But it can be better as long as we have the eagerness to make it better. Only in this way, can a promising future for man be anticipated.

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