if you do not put that away right now,you and i are gonna have problems,Carla snarled as janet scribbled in her writer's notebook.

以描述开始

millie's face turned red when she entered the room. Stapled on the walls all around were poctures of her.above the dresser was a poster-size photograph of her eighth grade graduation.to the left of the door was a collage of all her school pictures  how had someone she had never seen before created such a monument in her honor?

jason's house was a lot like a mmuseum. there were pretty,breakable objects everywhere ans you were not allowed to touch a thing.

以背景信息开始

kevin was accustomed to being first.Since he had started track,a sixth grader on the high school team,he had always been a champion.

as long as she could remember,d's name had always been moispronounced by the teacher on the first day of school.

以人物的心理描写开始

not this time,you won't,I thought as I stood there staring into my father's eyes.I picked up the basketball and began to dribble with my left hand.

增加张力

that was a freezing Christmas,and the state forecasted heavy snowfall.I went out partying with my friends ...i came home in high spirits of ecstasy only to be greeted by your stony face.

here,your christmas present,i bought you this,you said calmly

i opened it and a pink bear fell out and landed on my knees,i stared at the bear in disbelief

taking it by the arm,i flung is across the room in disgust 

i stormed out of the house,into the smow outside 

riya opened the door quietly and walkeed into the yard  Riya stood still time flied unconsciously An enormousy giant spaceship overlapped the round moon once by the time Riya was too terrified to speak or even shout.Suddenly,a sprawling wind encompassing Riya's body and a human-like creature moving towards Riya

故事放缓

结尾部分

说明或指明故事中冲突的结果

好的故事结尾也可出自人物的主要行动

iwalked towards the shelf where the girl had left ther