Revise 5-10minutes

content        40%

organization   30%

language       30%

Content

add details, evidence, examples, explanations

开头添加topic sentence

末尾添加explanation

Organization

check transition过渡

To develop a point further

To address a counterargument

Language polishments

(1)introduction

(2)Revising for better content

Re-read the essay prompt to see if your draft has fully addressed the topic.then,

1,Doing nothing:If you think the draft is clear enough,then do nothing.

2,Add information:If you find any parts unclarified,you can add detail,evidence,example,explanation,etc

3,Cut information:If you find a sentence is not related to the topic or you are repeating some ideals,cut them.

(3)improving organization

(4)Refinding Language

phenomenon phenomena

basis bases 

crisis crises

medium media

environment-friendly (sth)

protect the environment(sb)

主动态 consist  

requiare mending  

wear smooth

be polite

ace their exams考试取得好成绩

能用10个字表达不要用20个字